Last Updated on June 12, 2020 by Nathaniel Tower
Everyone knows the best way to start a novel or a story is with a killer opening line. You need something that hooks the reader and immediately sets whatever mood you’re trying to set. It should be your best sentence. In fact, what follows doesn’t really matter that much because you’ve done such a good job getting the reader interested that nothing could possibly let them down.
Why a bad opening line can ruin your entire body of work
A bad opening line will lead to instant rejection. No editor is going to want to publish a story that doesn’t open with something profound or impactful. No reader will sift through 300 pages of words if the first sentence doesn’t zoom right out of the gates and smack them in the face and chest so hard they never forget it. If the first sentence isn’t great, the rest of your work sucks by default.
Tips for creating the best opening line ever
So you have to create an awesome opening line, but you don’t want to spend all day doing it. After all, you have thousands of other words to write too. It’s definitely not easy, but here are some secret tricks you can use to help you craft the best opening line ever:
- Use really profound and writerly words to show the reader that you know how to write.
- Start with the ending to really blow their minds.
- Incorporate familiar phrases that make the reader really see and feel what you are writing so they can relate.
- Open with a contradiction or big twist that makes the reader say, “Oh shit, I’m in for a wild ride!”
- Be so vague that the reader has no idea what’s going on and therefore has to read more.
- Make it so complex that the reader will instantly know your plot is going to be super enthralling and deep.
- One word: profanity.
Some examples of great opening lines you can use yourself
Think you have it now? Here are some examples of killer opening lines I’ve been noodling with that will capture your audience and lead to writerly fame and fortune. Once you have a line like one of these, the rest of the book will pretty much write itself!
- He turned on his heel and started walking away, his hand clenched so tight on his throbbing member that his knuckles turned white.
2. A frothy cloud of dust motes swarmed around her head like a translucent halo as she prayed that everything would turn out okay even though she was sure it wouldn’t, but then she forgot all about praying and realized it was time to dust.
3. He awoke from a dream in a relieved panic; what follows in the next 312 pages is what he dreamed about that caused such a panic in his bones and made him so relieved to finally awaken from such a panic-stricken dream.
4. I don’t really know how to tell this story, but I’m going to tell it anyway because I think I actually do know how to tell it, but first I need to warn you that you’re in for one wild ride.
5. The way it began was the way it ended with the middle coming somewhere closer to the end than the beginning.
6. Fuck.
Feel free to borrow any of these for your next great novel or short story. I really don’t mind. You don’t even have to give me credit. Just be sure to let me know so I can buy a copy.
Seriously, stop worrying so damn much about your opening line
Too often, writers will struggle to find the right opening line before they begin their story or novel. They’ll complain, “I know what my story is going to be about, but I don’t know how to start it.” Here’s an idea: just start it. You can always go back and change the beginning later.
But here’s another thing to think about: your first line doesn’t need to be some standalone piece of brilliance. Look at all the “greatest” opening lines in the history of literature. None of them would be worth their weight in shit if what followed wasn’t equally great or even better. Do you really think “Call me Ishmael” is a great opening line by itself? Think it took a genius mind to write “It was the best of times, it was the worst of times…”? And don’t even get me started on that “Stately, plump Buck Mulligan” and his bowl of lather nonsense. These first lines are nothing without the rest of the work. We’ve made them into great opening lines because of the genius that follows.
So stop letting the opening sentence get in the way of your writing. If your entire work is great, your first line is also going to be great. Or at least good enough.
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Brilliant. I love this.
I like the opening,
“In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God, and the Word was made flesh, and dwelt among us”
It could be a science fiction novel. Or horror. Or fantasy. Or… I think anyone could substitute God with the name of their protagonist, I’m sure God doesn’t sue. Also the word Word could be substituted with a different one. Dream, say. Could that work?
In the beginning was the Dream, and the Dream was with Ivan Honeybutt, and the Dream was Ivan Honeybutt, and the Dream was made flesh, and dwelt among us. Fuck!
Now it starting to sound like an erotic comedy novel. Maybe Ivan should be substituted with Claire?
I think it’s perfect. Now go write the rest of it!
Any advice on how to avoid writing bad sex scenes?
Sure. Don’t write them in the first place! 🙂
Nice advices, I will sure use in my novel…
Awesome advice. I should incorporate this in my writing
I enjoy including a sexual dysfunction somewhere in the first paragraph.
Ha! That’s one way to hook the reader!
People can’t seem to resist a misfiring penis.
Thank you for the advice. I do love a good hook. I will put down a book so fast if I’m not grabbed in the first few pages.
You, sir, are my new favorite blogger!
Thank you! I will do my best to live up to the title.
Lol! I love it. This is definitely some good advise and I will remember to put an attention grabbing first sentence for my next book! Thanks for the tips!
I look forward to reading your first line (and all the lines that come after it). Let me know when your next book is out!
Killing the man had been easy; it was straight man to man, gun to gun, the kind of fight he had never lost, but the woman–killing her was different.
Love it! Sounds like a surefire bestseller to me.
I so appreciate this amazing article. You inspired me to change the first sentence of my novel, “Soul Whispers” about an abortion survivor. It starts out in a 1960 backsteet abortion clinic. I revised the first paragraph by moving a sentence from the middle of it, describing the abortion to the be the first sentence. Much more dramatic. The first sentence instead off being buried in the middle of the first paragraph now opens the novel with:
Sixteen-year-old Wendy Lee Renwick tried to still her shaking legs, knees clamped together, feet held apart in makeshift leather straps. Her teeth chattered uncontrollably, as her hands rested on her swollen belly.
More intriguing, I hope 🙂 Thanks so much!
I will share your link, absolutely!
My first line. I’m still editing. Please feel free to criticize. The novel is titled, “Fire in The Night”.
Maria ran barefoot down the deserted street, blood streaming onto the pavement from the open wound on her leg.
Thank you for sending this!
I like the line, but I would suggest ending it at “blood streaming onto the pavement.” I think this will create additional intrigue in the reader.
Here’s my first line to my very first historical novel. ( I usually writer fantasy.) It’s called Vengeance of a Slave .
The Romans arrived across the river and lined up all the men. They took every tenth one to be made an example of and then went into the woods and cut down trees.
Thanks, Nathaniel! Based on your suggestions, I deleted the first line of setting and began a conversation with a curse word, adding a bit of humor and sprinkling the setting throughout the dialogue. I like it much better. Your tips were awesome.
Thanks for reading and commenting! Please share your story/novel once it gets published!